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Now to the people who expressed interest and haven't shown up yet:

@zellected @Kal-El @Sarcelle Renard @Guilty Spark @Aegis1650 @Neurovoid @Apollosarcher

Friendly reminder that the OOC is up. If you no longer have any interest or feel you can't participate for whatever reason, please let me know asap. You're all entitled to a spot, but we do have about three people waiting to see if they can join the RP.


Sorry about that, I still love this concept I just don't have the time, so if someone's still waiting for a spot they can have mine. I didn't know the spots were being limited or I'd have dropped in sooner.
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@Guilty Spark No worries! Thank you for letting me know.
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@Leslie Hall

Not trying to rush you, I'm just genuinely curious, do you have a planned ETA for the IC?

I'm exited to get this started, so many good characters and so much potential here.
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@Crimson Raven I think it ultimately comes down to the fact that a few of us haven't put up CS' yet. In fact all three of us GM's are guilty of that.

The best date I can give is probably Monday. But that's best case scenario. Though I don't plan on letting the OOC drag on longer than Wednesday. I have my draft of the initial setting almost ready to go over with the GM's.

In the meantime I should really get my characters ready.
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I'd like to introduce everyone to... the Captain of the Cloud Chasers, Ambrose Dahalag!

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@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:



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@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:



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@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:



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@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:



Alright alright, probably know by now that I like critiquing characters. Its just me.

Not much to say here, except for one very large problem, which I will get to.

Your history is good, your personality is good.

The problem lies in magic. I tried to make a portal user once, and the GM explained to me very politly that Portal, along with Time is one of those abilities that are just too powerful to give to the players even with severe limitations. They basically have the ability to bend space, and with that comes a host of unintended Reqired Secondary Powers. Like closing the portal on something, or passing through the border with it. The rift would act like the sharpest sword in existance, literally severing whatever at the molecular level. Or, my favorite, opening a portal beneath and above someone, essentially trapping them in an endless free fall, in which you only would have to close the portal after they hit terminal velocity and they go splat. Thats only two examples, with thought, you could come up with many more.

Requip-Knight is an iffy one. Swapping out armors is okay, one, if you detail every armor and weapon he has (So no "Ah ha! I have the perfect armor for this situation" three or four times), two, if you limit the armor and weapons (say to three armors, and five weapons' the armors are the important ones really).

Again, just my two cents, final judgment is, as always up to the the GM and Co.
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@Crimson Raven On the contrary, that was the exact kind of criticism I was looking for. You brought up a lot of points that I didn't even begin to consider and made me realize that even for an S class mage the power is probably too good. I will also make sure to go in and specify exactly what kind of equipment he has, but believe me when I say that I was not going to pull any cheeky meta game nonsense, especially since I specified that he can't Requip mid-fight. I'll wait until I hear from a GM first, but I'll likely change the portals to something a bit more tame like Teleportation.

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.
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@Crimson Raven On the contrary, that was the exact kind of criticism I was looking for. You brought up a lot of points that I didn't even begin to consider and made me realize that even for an S class mage the power is probably too good. I will also make sure to go in and specify exactly what kind of equipment he has, but believe me when I say that I was not going to pull any cheeky meta game nonsense, especially since I specified that he can't Requip mid-fight. I'll wait until I hear from a GM first, but I'll likely change the portals to something a bit more tame like Teleportation.

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.


Teleportation is only a bit more tame. 😅

My advice is to just make sure you specify things like cooldown, distance, Magic consumption, ect.
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@Crimson Raven Of course. I have no intention of making an auto-dodging, invincible god of a character, as nothing kills an RP faster than a Gary Stu.
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I should just hire @Crimson Raven to review CS' for me.

@Sarcelle Renard No point in me offering my critique because it's the same and you're dealing with it.

I love not having to do extra work.
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@Leslie Hall I suggest you put [ code ] [/ code ] on the CSs. It's so hard for me to copy paste and put codes over and over again lol

I hate to be mean @Sarcelle Renard but because I dislike Erza, I didn't bother reading your CS. After reading the last chapter of FT, Nakama Queen just made me realize how much I hate her. Nevertheless, I will review your CS. It's just that, it's cancer when I saw a glimpse of it because it's Erza's magic and no offense to Erza fans, she's such a Mary Sue character. I used to like her tbh but ever since Tenrou arc, I hated her.
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How is it hard?
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@Indra No worries, I totally understand how you feel. I'm also doing a complete rework on the magic section, so you may as well hold off on your review anyway.
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Also, if you think Erza is a Mary Sue you probably do not understand what a Mary Sue is. FYI.
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@Gowi I know but I'm gonna be biased anyway. I cannot comprehend her wins at all, she's like the Sasuke of Fairy Tail but with My Little Pony drugs though Sasuke is better. Gray wins with strategies. Natsu is not as bad as Erza. Lucy got tactics like Gray. Wendy too.

Alvarez arc is shit.
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Being biased doesn’t absolve you of being wrong, though. Despite Erza being a powerful character (S Class, remember?) she has a lot of flaws and dimensions, so describing her as a Mary Sue is pretty incorrect as far as assessments go. Nobody has to like her character, but you should at least get your tropes correct when criticizing her.
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