[@Sarcelle Renard] Just wondering how your updates to the CS are coming along?

[@Lmpkio] I don't think I need to really give you a full review, since you already know my opinion of Alexanders personality and his character in general. My basic gist was that I think he makes for an interesting antagonist and I like him quite a bit.

I'm still very apprehensive on parts of his history. Particularly the whole concept of simply absorbing a Lacrima and then becoming insanely powerful doesn't gel right with me. Other than the mentioning of attending a Military Academy when he was young, there's no real mention of him ever earning his power. It's just bestowed upon him.

The Magic is fine balance wise, but I can't help but feel as though it's redundant. We already have a character who uses Sun Magic, and unfortunately Alexander's variant doesn't really attempt to do anything unique to separate itself from theirs.

I'm glad you decided to rework Alexander to bring into the Roleplay even though he wasn't able to fill a Slayer Role. Though all that's really been changed is the fact that he's not a Devil Slayer anymore and that he's now been bumped up to S Rank. It's not really substantial given the problems I identified above. At this point I'm not really sure if there's a way for him to be accepted unless some major changes are made at least to his magic. I can live with the backstory, even if I find it to be a bit too convenient in terms of how he gained his power; but I'm not going to allow another Sun Mage.