[@Ambiguity] - [hider=x]All right, there's potential hear, but quite a few issues we need to address.
One, with the way she stands now, I don't see the character as Commander ranking, possibly First or Second Class, but not Commander. It's merely a title, yes, but it pertains to power levels rather than actual leadership. 

Second, I think it's just a typo, but Faelan is the capital, Nibelheim is the medical sanctuary - but that is an easy fix.
The biggest concern right now, and this might break the character, is that the current line of events doesn't coincide with her entire background. I've no qualms with the medic origins, but Archadia has only [i]just[/i] sealed their border and the events of Ground Zero are recent, thus it wouldn't be plausible for her to be aware of monsters, and living near the Grounds like you've stated. It's difficult to play a combative medic when they haven't really [i]seen[/i] combat, but it's possible to be trained for it - that's not a glaring concern.

I'm having issues grasping her.. burst fire pulse rifle? You'd have to explain that to me, and temper down the bullets capable of targeting someone's immune system, that's entirely over powered. While technology is advanced and such advanced weaponry a possibility, some things much be kept within reason. 

We can defer in a message to guide the character into being accepted, if you'd like, because as I said: there's a lot of potential.

But I won't be completely negative, I really like her abilities and I really love her Aeon, you took to that part of the lore and aspects very well. And there's nothing I like seeing more than a critically moral character that struggles with the aspect of death in concerns to life. It makes for some development later in the narrative.[/hider]

[@DJAtomika] - [hider=x]This is a nice character, one of the guys is an interesting trope.
But there's some things we need to address and clarify.

One, Archadia does not have any standing military, nor is there any royalty - unless I misread that bit - but Archadia has to rely on Galbadia for military support because they've focused more on science rather than militia gain. This is a another combat medic I see, and it's difficult to really have one considering there hasn't been much combat prior to the current league of events. Being trained is a possibility, but there hasn't really been enough conflict to produce one of accurate and appropriate experience. There is a military front that coexists outside of SOLDIER, but there hasn't been a war, or anything, to produce the typical front of knowledge for a veteran like type.

Second, she found her Aeon? The characters may be aware of them, but they were found many-many years prior this current series of events, so that will not be plausible. I'm not too keen on being able to coat her weapons within fire, especially seeing as she carries a lot of guns on her person. Which I need to ask that you temper down just a tad, SOLDIERS are regulated to a degree, we already have abilities to use, a gun or two will suffice.

You can PM me if you'd like to deliberate over changes and the like.[/hider]

I realize I should have produced a timeline much like I did in the prior. I shall remedy that soon.