[@Rockette] Woo comments! I'll get right to editing. The timeline you posted very recently also clarified a lot of the current state of the world for me. Also, I'll change Faelon to Nibelheim. I think I was confused, on my part, when I read Archadia's description since they're a prominent medical country, if you will. Anyway, easy fix! Just a few questions, if you don't mind? While the backstory will need to be majorly reworked, I would really like to keep her military history. While contact with the monsters near Ground Zero will most definitely be taken out, would it be a stretch to have a militia garrison near the northern part of Archadia? I can salvage her backstory if I can keep her little bit about biological warfare on bandits that raid the northern towns that are far from Archadian civilization. However, if all of Archadia is civilized, as in heavy militia presence everywhere, I can definitely rework her backstory even more where she's simply trained. But that biological warfare aspect is a major part of her character and leads to the conflict with Ascephea. I'd love to hear your thoughts! As for the weaponry, the pulse rifle is a fancy word for a combat rifle that has been modified ever so slightly to have more stopping power than a normal assault rifle that'd be seen with members of the militia. Out of thought of SOLDIERs having access to gear that perhaps normal military/militia personnel wouldn't have access to. However! I'm more than happy to relabel. Like I said, I'm very receptive to needed changes and such. I will most definitely knock down her ranking. When I was making the character sheet, I was unsure of what would constitute Commander, First, Second, and Third class SOLDIERs. Your clarification's very helpful *Thumbs up* I think that wraps up the questions. I'll begin editing the easy fixes while I wait for your input on the backstory.