[@Zarkun] Definitely not crazy. Although it may or may not have been stated OOC, the assumption is that all Pokemon either evolve at level 10 or 20. Because two-stage Pokemon's second stage form is considered a stage 3 Poke, it can be assumed that 2-stage Pokemon evolve at level 20 rather than 10.

[@Masterkeun] Love the idea of a baker! I believe your first idea with the Poke Corp and buying out the bakery was fine as the lore is largely ambiguous to allow for such creativity. Just know that the Poke Corp will probably not be able to be "beaten" out of the market, although the fate of your character's store will be up to you. So feel free to change it back, flesh it out, or stick with what you have now if you'd like.

Also, could you add in a quick "Inventory" section? And with a Pokeball. Your first trainer shouldn't have any Pokemon in possession at the start of her journey, but she can definitely use her Pokeball to catch a Pokemon she's known for a long time in your first post.

Other than that the sheet looks fine :) Just waiting on Balth to approve then.