[@The Wild West] Artificer is all good to go! I absolutely love that his trigger to become a tinker was his inability to be a tinker, and even after he finally got his wish he still can't actually enjoy the thrill of designing and building his own physics-breaking inventions. [@Banana] Her list of skills seems pretty small for someone that was getting all As and Bs in school. Is she just book smart without any real practical skills? Also why would her father being in the PRT mean she wants to avoid the Protectorate at all costs? I'd like a little expansion on their relationship and why she has that thought process. Last and most importantly, her powers aren't well defined enough. The range you added is a great detail, but we need some more details. How much control does she have over the stone she's manipulating? Is there a weight or mass limit to how much she can manipulate at a time? How well can she split focus on multiple sources or objects at the same time? Perhaps most importantly, how much force and speed can she shoot her earth off with? If we can address this then I can guarantee an approval. [@Kafka Komedy] I'm not seeing the trigger moment for him. I definitely know the problem that caused it, but there doesn't appear to be a moment of an actual "trigger," the defining moment that breaks his power out. He's just pissed off and then just sorta builds his robot ears. It flows so casually that it feels like he could always do that. Get me a more defined trigger moment where we can actually see the revelation and we're good to go.