Alright, now for some actual character reviews....

[@DrunkasaurusRex] [hider=the things] given your character's age... He was born some two decades before monsters began appearing en masse. There were monsters in the sense that large and vicious wildlife was still a thing, maybe some raiding from natives or bandits. What few monsters you would've seen were the result of shamanistic magic as opposed to them just appearing, so your character could've conceivably spent his childhood there.

I am also a bit surprised that he liked the Papal Knights while disliking his Priest Mentors, though I guess it could be said that the Papal Knights are cut of a somewhat different cloth than most priests. And with the way Ironhoff military works, he'd likely be put into one branch- infantry or cavalry, upon joining up with the military and stick to it most of his career. Though being an officer would grant him a horse, and therefore training on the horse.

You write this character as being extremely proficient in both melee and ranged combat of both mounted and unmounted varieties- all of this gained during a time of relative peace. He's also armed to the nines and well armored... What I'm getting at he's good at a lot of things, a bit too much so. - the balance of all of this would need some tweaking. Toning down some of his combat skills, something like that.

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[@Sergeant] [hider=More things]I honestly like the drawing style artwork for the character, fitting with the theme so props for that. Your character's background work work out just fine- a bit more flesh would be nice. While women in the Dominion military is relatively uncommon, its not unheard of. There might be a bit of a stigma against her, especially as an officer, at least for those outside of her influence of command. 

The skills section can be expanded upon a bit, its a bit on the sparse end and not as clear as I would like.
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