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The bit about the elves and the great tree seems disjointed. A lot of his history is also kinda sparse, like you just took a bunch of bullet points and linked them together. Also, how did the discovery of an Oasis lead to him be conscripted into the Ilyan military but was offered a private gig by an Ilyan nobleman? Just a bit of discrepancy. 
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y0ur bo0l3tz are made of m@g!c? I've not much to say about this character, I like it. It gives me a bit of a wild west vibe to it, but nothing wrong with that. How skilled is she with magic? How did she learn it? I find it might be harder for her to be extremely skilled in magic [i]and[/i] firearms. Is she very good at specifically shooting fire out of her guns? Is she capable of manipulating it any other way? 
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