[@POOHEAD189] Looks pretty much solid! Only thing to mention is that you say you are Dragon Marked in race but have the Mark of Talos in truth, just a quick fix there. Also, when and why was your character Marked? If you want that to be  a secret that's cool, just make sure to PM me about it. Most people either have Marks inflicted on them to make them better tools or they do it to themselves out of devotion to the faith the Mark comes from, or, because they want some kind of power. Marks are considered taboo and seen in a negative light by most of society. Just something to keep in mind. :D