[@ClocktowerEchos]
Well, it seems I have misunderstood the overall power levels and inspirations sources of the game.

From the description I've concluded that the majority of inspiration comes from the Dark Heresy rather than the tabletop wargame, where psykers work decidedly differently, having a shitton of powers bought from up to three or even four disciplines at even medium levels of power (in an acolyte-level game), not counting about a dozen minor powers gained as they buy up Psy Rating.

From you saying that the players are supposed to be members of the inquisitorial retinue rather than simple acolytes I have also reasoned that you expected us to play as Ascension-level Agents of the Throne, who have all the reasons, authority and prestige required for having the (actually very modest) described set of wargear to carry into actual battles as opposed to more discrete and careful investigations carried out on, say, Imperial worlds. You can also notice that a spyrer suit is not included into said wargear, being mentioned only in his background.

As to badassery - without any mockery or irony, excuse me for unreasonably assuming that it, together with a background involving some truly heroic and unusual feats is a given considering that the character in question was assumed to be a member of inquisitorial retinue. 

Pertaining to the male geisha fact - yes, dude looks like a lady. If that is a decidedly unacceptable detail for your game, please excuse me for including it.

Would you allow me to properly edit and remake the sheet to make it more fitting for your requirements and re-apply?