[@Awesomoman64] It's not like the post was too long. Its just Tegonay's death felt overlong for the emotional dryness.

I would agree that the underlying reason is a rush to finish. The  whole role play feels a little of that. And for good reason. I'm just hoping we make it there.  

I'd like to also express that I have a tough rating system. 10 means so amazing everyone should see it regardless of if they like the medium.