Hey, I'm fairly new to the website so I just wanted to post my idea to see if it was any good. Any advice or help is appreciated! 

Name: Vincent (Weasel) Magoni

Age: 26

Ethnicity: white, American/Italian

Occupation/Place in the Combination: no official position, Precinct Captain

Personal History:

Vincent "the Weasel" Magoni was the best con man the city had ever seen, but life didn't start so easy for him. Born a prositutes son, he spent his early days on the streets as a beggar, using his natural born wit and charm to scrape a living out of the city. He took a job as a street sweeper, factory worker and countless other jobs Before the machine took notice of him. The machine promised him something he could never resist: power. All his life. Vinny had been the odd man out, the slick, the smart aleck, hated for always being able to slip out of every situation. They couldn't have known the skinny tall guy wearing a dirty suit had dreams of grandeur. And so he joined up as a precinct captain, one of the best (according to himself). He patrolled the west side, fooling the suppressed and hardworking immigrants that "a vote for the Pattersons is a vote for you!". Vincent is determined to scale the ranks of the machine, to finally achieve his lifelong dream of not being the little guy anymore.