[center][h1][color=crimson]Savannah Churchill[/color][/h1][/center] [center][img]http://i65.tinypic.com/2lsi06d.jpg[/img][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/3R5vYYi.png?2[/img][/center] [hr][center]π•Šπ•–π•‘π•₯. 𝟟, 𝟚𝟘𝟚𝟘 / / π•Œπ•Šπ”Έβ„π•€π•ƒβ„• 𝔼𝕒𝕀π•₯ / / π•Šπ•–π•”π•¦π•£π•šπ•₯π•ͺ 𝕆𝕦π•₯𝕑𝕠𝕀π•₯: 𝕆𝕓𝕀𝕖𝕣𝕧𝕒π•₯π•šπ• π•Ÿ β„π• π• π•ž πŸ™ / / πŸ™πŸŸπŸ™πŸš[/center][hr] Well, that sure was... interesting. In no less than six minutes, Abusement Park had dominated Multiple Scorgasms in a brutal fight, coming out of it victorious. [i]Interesting[/i] was the only way to describe it. Entertaining would make Savannah sound sadistic, while frightening would make her out to be weak. But, to be honest, she didn't feel like the fight could be described in either of those terms. So interesting was the word she'd use for the time being. Or, rather, when her mind could scrounge up another adjective to describe it. And that'd take a while, as she wasn't the type of girl to use fancy lingo in everyday speech. Savannah took a dark purple pen from the basket of writing utensils, tapping it on the desk for a few moments. What should she write? The fight was a complete disaster- it had been hard to keep track of all the one-on-one fights that had been going on at the same time. She twirled the hyacinth-colored pen in her small hands, still staring at the paper. She began to write- her tongue sticking out of her mouth as she scrawled on the paper with deep orchid ink. [i][b]General Thoughts:[/b][/i] Seriously? Pantsing people? What is this, preschool? That part with the tentacle was [i]disgusting[/i]. [i][b]Suggested Improvements:[/b][/i] Some people need to learn to control their ability (Most notably vampire boy or whatever his name is). He [i]barely[/i] restrained himself from punching off that blue haired girl's head in their fight. They need better teamwork. There was almost no cooperation or strategizing on their parts, and I don't think that'd go well for them when they're really battling. After Savannah had finished, she handed the paper off to Rosa and sat back down in her seat; waiting impatiently for their fight to begin. She had been anticipating this part.