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I like the character so far, though I do not particularly like biography being as short as the minimum is about three paragraphs. I would like to get to know this character a little better, like knowing/elaborating on what sort of complications she had to go through being younger and how she grew up, etc. Be creative. Also, it is a bit strange having a twenty year old being in high school playing as a junior. The setting takes place past the summer of 2004 in the second week of school. Would you mind changing her age to 15 or 16 or so and having her as a junior instead? Other than that, everything about the character is perfect. Feel free to additional information if you want as well. PM me if you need anything.