[center][color=a187be][h1] Allison Revel[/h1][/color][img]http://i.imgur.com/qYQfQN4.gif[/img][/center]

What had Allison just witnessed? In just over half the time allotted, team two had been annihilated by team one. Wasn't this supposed to be a game, a team-building exercise of some sort? It had ended up being so much worse. Multiple injuries, blood everywhere, and a distinct brutality that absolutely sickened the girl.

Allison made no attempts to hide her disgust. She had stared on as the events unfurled, powerless to stop the carnage. The USARILN staff were more heartless than Allison had thought, and it seemed that they got more heartless as the days passed. They had forced a bunch of untrained teenagers to fight monsters, with 2 deaths, and now they were forcing them to fight each other. Though, what seemed to be the worst part was that they had played along, they had attacked each other, and they had injured each other over a reward that just wasn't worth the suffering.

Allison's train of thought came to a halt as she was handed an evaluation sheet. She immediately picked up a pen and started writing, scribbling out the first section after she wrote it.

[quote][h1]General Thoughts[/h1]

[s]What was that? That wasn't a game, and it was barely a fight. It was just a massacre. What was the goal of this, exactly? If it was to inspire teamwork, or to get a benchmark on it, it didn't work as intended. If anything, all this will have done is give them grudges to hold against each other. Do you intend to just destroy us, to rip us limb from limb one pointless skirmish at a time? You're lucky we seem to have no sense in us to prefer death to this suffering.
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The fight seems like it was ineffective  for whatever the purpose was. The battle was one sided, due to major mistakes on the part of team two. Many of the combatants need more training, due to terrible use of powers, and a lack of teamwork.Both teams talked too much.

[h1]Suggested Improvements[/h1]

Grant proved to be the most useful member of team one in the end. His ability allowed him to take the flags without having to fight much. Angel seemed to take a backseat during the first few minutes of the fight, only really attacking Chris. It was surprising to see her attack anyone at all. Marcus' use of his powers seemed haphazard, could have been better applied. Sander was a monster, a horrible, awful thing. It seemed like he was acting solely on instinct.

Team two was a mess. Siena abandoned the fight, which may have cost her team the entire thing. Chris' attacks were ineffective, likely due to incompetence. Kusari cut off her own arms. Callan was the most effective member of team two, though having to fight both of the strongest members of the opposing team led to her failure. [/quote]

Allison silently handed in her form.