[quote=@dragonmancer]
Sorry for the delay, I've been working on ways to introduce my char and I'm thinking on waiting for some posts from others that haven't posted so I could get a better idea on what to do and work on that.
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Of course I can help you if really necessary.


[quote=@Savo](or make your new chary partially Asian).
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No, I mean characters from [i]Asian[/i] countries.


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[@wxps350] Now a quick critique about your punctuation in your post. Your post was actually a pretty solid introduction, but your weird punctuation patterns deducted from it a bit. 

What I mean is:


[quote=@wxps350][color=LightSkyBlue]"Oh. Not really. I never really get warm, I guess... Can I help you?"[/color].[/quote]


See that period at the end? That's what I'm talking about. It's really unnecessary, and really distracts from the action a bit there. In addition, as a rule of thumb; you should always press enter whenever a new person starts talking to make posts smoother and easier to read. Basically making it easier to tell who's talking, and who's not talking.

I [i]hope[/i] I'm not trying to sound like a nitpicky asshole here, but I want everyone here to strive for perfection. \( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)/