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[@Eyeris] I've been waiting patiently. Have you looked at the changes on my CS? Is there anything else I need to add on to or change?
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I stated in the OOC that I was having a tough time finding time for things. You have posted a lot. I appreciate your persistence but I would not describe it as patient. 

Our pace is sometimes slow, this might not be a good fit for you. 

[quote=@RokkuHoshi]
Name: Rockin' Strings

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Species: Unicorn pony

World of Origin: The same world as Equestria but a different country known as Coltrea.
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I don't watch this show. Can you elaborate on Equestria? How is it different from Earth?
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Are you a member of TRIDENT? No.

Are you one of those seemingly normal people? If so, what do you do? No.

Appearance: Rockin' stands three and a half feet tall with bright blue-green eyes, dark red fur, mane and tail with dark grey highlights/streaks, and a foot-long horn protruding from his forehead. He wears a pair of mechanical wings on his back, on top of which he carries his guitar, and a golden locket around his neck.

Abilities and skills: He can use the basic unicorn magic, which is a very short list of short range teleportation, only up to 50 meters maximum, levitation of any object up to the size of a cow, and a cloud-walking spell, allowing him to walk on clouds as easily as on land, as well as utilise his magic and his metal wings to fly rather sloppily, usually ending with a crash.
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Can you break this down? 

Teleportation:
Levitation of objects:
Cloud walking:
Flying:

This might be a bit much, teleportation and levitation? I'm trying to figure out what your characters 'role' is. 

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Strengths and Weaknesses: While he excels with his magic, he is much better with his guitar and his inventing. However, he is a poor creative thinker, flier and singer.

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Again trying to figure out the role of your character. Is he a magician or a musician? or an inventor? Maybe there is a context that I don't understand from the show? It seems very random.

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Equipment Requests: Mechanical wings, guitar, locket.
 
History: Growing up in a large town was beneficial for Rockin'; he knew almost everypony, had a handful of close friends, and a loving family. He was often asked by his mother to take care of his younger brother, Ash, but normally left him to his own devices. Both colts were often in trouble; Ash for breaking his horn again and Rockin' for letting him. The only part of his life that differed from his friends was the fact his parents always had to remind him of the old legend.
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What is the old legend?

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Personality: Rockin' is the fun-loving, kind-hearted stallion mares would rather befriend than attempt a relationship with. He loves playing pranks on his pals but isn't as good at it as his best friend. He easily gets lost in his music while playing. 
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