[@Norschtalen]

Myself and my Co-GM are reviewing your CS, won't be able to give you a concise list of changes until tomorrow. However, I can tell you now that pretty much her entire backstory needs to be re-worked. Nothing about her becoming an Assassin is believable or realistic; she picks everything up by accident or by luck. That's not how the real world works, so she's going to need somebody to train her. More feedback will follow after I've slept, but that's something for you to work on while I do.