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[@PrivateVentures] I believe everything is in order with regards to our previous concerns and I see nothing majorly in need of an edit. Unless Sam has further words, I think you might be done with rewriting. 

[@The Spectre] Shouldn't take too long for that. 

[@MechonRaptor] You did a good job with the sheet, it was very in-depth and I really got a feel for the character. My one issue is that from what we understand, indentured servitude does not work that way. IIRC, indentured servants voluntarily sell themselves into servitude and are released after their contracts are up, and contract holders are barred from abusing them. A dubious practice to be sure, but it it's not quite as horrific as the ordeal your PC went through. Pure uncut slavery would be more common in other Terminus locations however, and Omega might be a good substitute for Illium. You could keep the exact same backstory otherwise. Sam might have more to say on the matter. 

[@Silver Fox] The sheet looks mostly fine to me, I would just say a snippet should be added on how Phalanx would have come to the attention of the Spectres or any Citadel agency, it should have some kind of reputation or interaction for the Spectres to be motivated to tap Phalanx as an operative. Is it on Earth, helping with reconstruction? Is it part of some Geth contingent on the Citadel? If your intention was for Phalanx to be recognized for being helpful in the fighting, then it should be clear it gained recognition for that. 

[@AquaAzura] I think you pretty much addressed everything we brought up. Sam has final word on accepting the sheet but you're definitely close if not already there. 

I will ask no more Quarian characters are made, and I think having one more Krogan might be overkill. 






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I suppose I'm just having trouble finding a reason or way for that. But I'll try again tomorrow since being part of the war wasn't enough