[@Duthguy]


I like the direction you're taking this train, brother. He's got this feel where he seems like he, motherfucking. trying to combat his own powers and their faults and place rather than enhance them. While sticking to this water beast deal. 

The only thing he needs is: 1 what is the free item he gets when he opens his closet for the first time and 2: I'd like just a little more work in his appearance and personality. I just want to see you flex those literacy muscle a little bit, just so I can get a good taste of what you can do. That way I can work better with how you'd like to write.

Your dude got a lot of emotions there. Is he normally emotional man or is this his way of dealing with shock. You know, stuff like that.