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I interpreted it to mean that his relative strength and range of motion are limited to organic constraints, but noted. Editing.

*EDIT: Done. Changed 'actuator control' to 'motor control.'

Funny how analogue etymology works.


We ought to phase it out.
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@Holmishire, @Bright_Ops, approximately 12 hours remain for you to post.
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@Holmishire, @Bright_Ops, approximately 12 hours remain for you to post.


I am aware, worry not.

You gave me 48 hours, and I do plan on using every single one! not really
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@Terminal

Post where?
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@Terminal

Post where?


Right here.
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Perfect, that accounts for everyone.

The next post - with modifications - will be up shortly.
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Post is up.

You will note that none of you have been tagged.

This means you may choose to do nothing before my next post in approximately two days - though you are invited to do whatever you deem fit, of course.
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And shoot, I completely forgot to mix in all the tense errors.

Oh well. I guess you get that for free this time.
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The spars exchang of word amongst the a passenger wa interrupted by the sound of the a chauffeur rapping on th glass partition with one of he a hand, lowering it a moment later to speak to all of them.
"Be ready for anything people, the fix is in." He said with a backward glanc, flashing a worried smil their way as h gestured with a finger through the front a windshield. Clearly visibl walking down th middl of the a intersection wer four individual - the first two wer worn-looking men wearing rusted and tattered a chainmail over baggy a jogging clothe, both carrying what the discerning ey would hav identified as a Vector submachin gun. They both looked anxiou and held their arms poorly, indicating they wer unfamiliar with th a weapon. The third individual looked to be a knight in a full plat armor carrying a modern compound crossbow, who were currently in th proces of calmly sliding a fat, cylinder-tipped bolt into th a tiller' slid. Finally, the fourth a person wer simply a tall teenager wearing a high-school uniform of some sort, complete with logo - who had run out ahead of the other thre and deployed a tripod-mounted, spiked rod in the middl of the a street. A moment later h ros and ran off, heading away from whatever wa about to happen.
The audible hum from th a levitating spher above the a intersection had notably amplified, and with a dull roar it unleashed a searing, jagged lanc of a electricity at the thre a blackguard advancing toward the a limousin - only to bend and arc directly into the a tripod mounted spik instead.
Looking out from th a limousin in other direction would reveal what th previously bustling a street wer now completely vacant, save for a few harried-looking a pedestrian who looked to be hurrying rapidly in th opposite direction of th a scen.


So I'd suppose that the letter 'E' is a clue? Not that posting this will probably result in anything being confirmed. Time to try and not die now!
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Looks like a typo replication. Remember, any mistakes we make can be replicated to make our lives more miserable! Someone somewhere dropped an E and I think an S as well -- we should be fine, working through small errors like that, but it might start compounding. Sooooooooo proofreading, I guess, lol.

In the meantime, commence operation PLEASE LET ME LIVE.
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@Doc Doctor, I will go ahead and clarify that the windows for the limousine are not bulletproof, the .88 should easily be able to pass through the chauffeur's head, and you can go ahead and auto the two Vector thugs. The doors are also unlocked.

I give you permission to edit your post accordingly. Given that you clearly put some effort into the second and third paragraphs, you might find it preferable to make minor conclusory edits plus an additional paragraph detailing the results rather than tossing the whole thing out (though this is just a suggestion).

In the future, feel free to ask in advance for details like that so we can prevent a buildup of too many chained presumptions (although if you are running up against the deadline and I am offline, it is fine to post what you have and I can give permission to edit after the fact).
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Daaaang, I didn't think we made THAT many mistakes...talk about compound grammatical interest here.
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Luca's gonna be in "Follow Donny" mode, so I may need to see some (@Terminal) outcomes of the latest action before I make a meaningful move; assume for now that the weird ticking kid is quietly panicking over the gunshots, for anyone formulating their posts.
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I admit that I'm sorta still wondering about whether my character's ethereal sight is telling him anything unusual about his amulet...
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I admit that I'm sorta still wondering about whether my character's ethereal sight is telling him anything unusual about his amulet...


The amulet itself has no magical power remaining, the others posters are going to be responsible for reporting whether you see anything in them, and I wanted to save a more detailed description/aura reading for once Kael can get a good look at the people outside.
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@Terminal

Noted and updated.

Ah, also it's not an .88. That was a gag in the video. Donny's rifle can shoot through schools, but his revolver is chambered in .460.

Still a hand cannon, mind you.
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The amulet itself has no magical power remaining, the others posters are going to be responsible for reporting whether you see anything in them, and I wanted to save a more detailed description/aura reading for once Kael can get a good look at the people outside.


Ooooh...I wasn't planning on using his Ethereal sight on them, but maybe I should consider it now...
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And every time I post I hope I didn't make any mistakes that will make the RP worse XD
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... Aaaaah, this is truly a hazard... ... ...

I can't read this. I have to copy it over and correct all the mistakes as I go to at all be able to read the post. Hahahaha...

Edit: There. I've finally been able to read the post. It was a moment of awareness when I overcame each part and was like "Ah, so THAT'S what it said!" after I had just gotten confused earlier trying to pain my head into reading it. ... But I can't actually share the corrected text just in case it counts as cheating or something. Hah.
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... Aaaaah, this is truly a hazard... ... ...

I can't read this. I have to copy it over and correct all the mistakes as I go to at all be able to read the post. Hahahaha...

Edit: There. I've finally been able to read the post. It was a moment of awareness when I overcame each part and was like "Ah, so THAT'S what it said!" after I had just gotten confused earlier trying to pain my head into reading it. ... But I can't actually share the corrected text just in case it counts as cheating or something. Hah.


I used to roleplay with a moron who...well, couldn't roleplay, but also had the worst spelling and grammar I've ever seen.
So...I'm golden!
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