[@AquaAzura] Edits look good, Milina is accepted.

[@Silver Fox] Again, the edits look good to me. If [@MrDidact] gives you the all clear then Phalanx is accepted.

[@PrivateVentures] I’m much more comfortable with the capacities of this revised character than the original incarnation. However please remember during play that Biotic abilities have a pretty substantial energy cost, and one can easily burn themselves out through extended use if they’re not careful (This note really goes for anyone thinking of using a biotically capable character.) Ellias is accepted.

About the powers though. How does Dyson Sphere turn an enemy’s shield or barrier into a ‘garbage disposal tornado’? My thought would be through the use of small, localised singularities, but that just begs the question, why not use singularities? And I’m not sure if biotics would allow one to transfer kinetic energy in the way catch describes. I thought biotics was just an ability to create mass effect fields? If I’m wrong, please correct me. IronMaiden is fine though, I can’t see any issues with it.

[@Arcarius] still waiting for a PM about that vengeance thing before I’ll ok the character.

[@DarkFey] If I haven’t said it already, I think your sheets good. Unless [@MrDidact] has anything to add you’re good to drop that bad boy in the CS section.

[@The Spectre] You still haven’t answered my initial question of how he earned money while living on the Citadel.

[@MechonRaptor] Great sheet. I’m sure it wouldn’t be the first time someone has taken advantage of the lax labour laws concerning indentured servitude in Illium, to the point where it is more closely resembles slavery. If the Eclipse paid off the right bureaucrats I can easily see them getting away with what they did too Rayes on Illium. I’d say you can leave it as Illium, to show the darker side of that particular planet. 

If I’ve missed anyone please let me know.