[@rocketrobie2][@Grueslayer]I look forward to your guys' CSs, whenever you can get them in is fine, so don't feel too rushed.

[@hellrazor]So, I like your general character concept, I really do. But I really need you to work on the general sentence structure, grammar, and spelling. What you've given me is something I'd expect from a mid-level Free roleplay CS, while what I'm expecting for this RP is a mid-to-high casual. Unless you can improve the quality of this CS, its rejected.