[@Tangletail]Eldrene has Aemon, and my Gleeman adamantly refuses to have any sort of protection or partners of any kind. They despise people in general. They're a grade-A asshole. [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4172383]If you check out the interest check, you can see what I've written regarding mercenaries in this campaign.[/url]

[@Lucky Knight] 
He needs to be a hell of a lot older than 24. Please read the character rules in the introductory post. 
Shorten the origin to just "Aelgar". 
"presumptive future commander of the kingdom's military." is unnecessary, we want the career only to show their current occupation, not future occupations. 
Faction, similarly, should be simplified to just "Aelgar". We want to avoid redundancies- "The Kingdom of" and "(military)" are unnecessary.
The history and appearance are great, though. More comments in PM.