[@Ashevelendar]I am assessing everyone's writing. I have been on this site for at least a year, and I notice you use the same character name for all of your characters. I am not a fan of premades. There was a guy in my last game who only uses one character for every game. I find this to be a problem for creativity and imagination reasons. If you can't come up with a fresh concept and instead use a tweaked version of the same character, then you won't ever grow as a writer.

[@Demous]You have a difficult time distinguishing between past and present tense. You flip-flop between tenses throughout your writing. You should really stick to one tense. If third person, it should be past tense.

[@FantasyChic]You, even in other games I notice, have a hard time interacting with others. Even in the last game I hosted, you couldn't bring yourself to RP with others who really wanted to RP with you. I feel that you intend to repeat this behavior in this game, and I am too much of a promoter of interaction to allow it. Practice breaking the ice more often.

I don't expect my criticism to be taken positively. Criticism is rarely received positively because not many people like it, but any game you see me create that is "casual-advanced" or "advanced," I care a lot more about who I write with than my casual games. Casual games, I absolutely do not care.

I consider "casual-advanced" advanced but without the fluff. If I wanted a fluffy writing game, then I'd go straight-up advanced. This one, you can write 2-3 paragraphs and as long as those paras got some quality and decent grammar, then bravo. I don't expect pages of writing unless your inspiration  causes it to happen, but whatever I digress. Thank you all for liking and showing interest in this game.