[@Ink Blood]Please reread the character sheet to put appropriate wording. I make mistakes a fair bit too, which is why rereading is key.

[quote]Gaderon stands at 5’11” with a lithe frame but solid frame.[/quote] 

[quote]Gaderon is a headstrong person confident, bordering on arrogant, in his own abilities.[/quote]
Just a few examples with commas and word choices. But it's ok, just reread and edit and you'll be good. 

Also, while the premise is fine, destroying a nest of Vampires is near impossible. Vampires are really powerful foes, though you could have slain one with the help of your Uncle. Or by yourself if you are really, really good.