[quote=@Emuxe] [hider=WhiteKit][center][img]http://txt-dynamic.static.1001fonts.net/txt/dHRmLjcyLmZmZmZmZi5WMmhwZEdWTGFYUSwuMAAA/pink-kangaroo.regular.png[/img] [b][color=6ecff6]WaveTribe[/color][/b][hider=Appearance][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/7a8e6cee379a47c1b56cae33dc2b349b.png[/img] Though she pretends that the notch in her ear was from a fierce scuffle, WhiteKit actually received it from one of her siblings while they were still at the teat.[/hider] [b]Name[/b] WhiteKit > WhiteNose [b]Age/Rank[/b] 4 moons - Kit [b]Size[/b] Currently [i]Small[/i], will grow to be [i]Huge[/i]. Fluffball. [b]Mother[/b] Sootbelly [b]Background[/b] Despite her large appearance, WhiteKit is the runt of her mother's litter. When they were a little under 2 full moons old, Sootbelly took her five kittens to the Elder's Den to learn of their tribe's vast history. While her siblings were generally disinterested and preferred to play, WhiteKit sat closest to Ringtail, eager to hear more. Since that day, WhiteKit recoiled from playing with her fellow kit to instead trek to the Elder's Den to bask in more of her elder's wisdom. [b]Personality[/b] Even for a kitten, WhiteKit is a naturally curious cat. Instead of playing with her fellow kits, WhiteKit prefers to fill her head with knowledge and wisdom. Over time, she has developed a general preference for the company of older cats, as she'd prefer to talk over play. Upon first hearing of the stories of the Shaman, WhiteKit discovered a desire to become one, and so is saddened by the fact that she cannot. [/center][/hider] [hider=NPC: Sootbelly][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/138bbad2140c4a299cff649b3cc794ed.png[/img][/hider] [b]Kits: [/b][hider=NPC: ShadowKit (better known as "Soot-Sleeper")][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/94d344af20cd4ca38038e2941ed1938f.png[/img] First-born, male. Will grow to be ShadowMask. Nickname comes from his black chest, belly, and tail. [/hider][hider=NPC: SmokeKit][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/40c87e9bb3904676b677f38c1759f38f.png[/img] Second-born, female [i]Will grow to be Smokeback[/i][/hider][hider=NPC: Skunk-Kit (S.K. for short)][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/744cd76e2f4446afae9d9d153e19f15d.png[/img] Third-born, male. Hates his [i][u]cruel[/u][/i] name. [i]Will grow up to be "Skunkback"[/i][/hider][hider=NPC: Quasi][img]http://image.prntscr.com/image/dcf0597532c84da4bf2e01e39efd6e29.png[/img] Fourth-born, male. Was only born with one eye, earning his name.[/hider] [/quote] I'm not quite sure about your fourth-born - the name Quasi seems a bit strange. Also, if you could write a short sentence for each of your NPC's personalities, that would be much appreciated (I completely forgot to mention that earlier, sorry!). Other than that, I'd say everything checks out!