[quote=@Ashevelendar] [@Holy Soldier] It's not really the same character. Actually it's not the same character at all. 90% of the time, the character is different. Either in attitude and looks or simply in attitude. If it bothers you, I'll change the name. I go with that name because I like the name. Nothing more. I'll go with the other name that I totally love so no problem with that. Also. Criticism is good and is taken positively as long as it is constructive criticism and not simply criticism on the idea that " I'm the boss, I do whatever I want and I don't care about your opinion ". Look at it please and give me an opinion :) Quick question (for my own curiosity) Oni(demons) exist and Oni are technically human. Could a person that had a guardian spirit, to be turned into a Oni and still retain the guardian spirit ? [color=fff200][b](No.)[/b][/color] [color=red] Oni [/color] I've re-read the whole post to be sure I didn't miss anything. [hider=Lilith Lanuae ] Name: Lilith Lanuae Titles/Honorifics: The Red or Serpent Age: 26 Origin: Creatoria (Romania). Profession: Mercenary Hobby: Singing Gender: Female. Race: Human Strengths: Loyal, Friendly to those she trusts, Honorable, Creative Weaknesses: Distrustful, Flirtatious, Materialistic, Vengeful Height: 1.87 m Weight: 57 kg Build: Lilith has a muscular body, a round face and small eyes. Hair: Red Eyes: Green Skin: Ruddy Handedness: Right Handed Scars: N/A Tattoos: Lilith has a tattoo on her biceps with the [url=http://dragoncrest.com/wp-content/uploads/ImperialMerchantsGuild-300x300.jpg] crest of the Merchant's Guild [/url]. Basic Description: Lilith is a merchant at heart. She knows how to behave in society. [hider=Visual Description:] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/ed/ff/81/edff8133dfc26030953428494c907737.jpg[/img] [/hider] Disabilities: N/A Primary Outfit: Lilith wears black medium armor that allows her to move freely while also giving her the possibility of moving fast enough to defend or attack at will. On her head she has a black hood that covers most of her face and her neck. Sandals is what she wears for her feet as they allow enough mobility for her fast strikes while also giving her the possibility of moving stealthy. Secondary Outfit: Lilith could be seen simply wearing a red robe that covers all her body exposing only her face. On her feet she wears her usual sandals. Most Prized Possession (Material Value): A necklace that she wears around her neck that has a crystal at it's center. A gift from a lord from when she was only a child. Most Prized Possession (Emotional Value): Her guardian spirit as she formed a strong bond with him. Likes: Flirting, Singing, Fighting, Training, Family Dislikes: Those that abuse others because they are richer/stronger/come from a better family, Wasting money, Those that shy away from a fair fight, Purpose: Lilith is searching for her lost nephew. Her goal is to make her family whole again and make her sister happy again. Sexuality: LGBTQ (Bi-Sexual) Relationship: Single [hider=Family:] Parents : Mother - Maria Lanuae (60 years old) Father - Marius Lanuae (61 years old) Both parents are alive and well at their estate in Creatoria. Siblings : Brother - George Lanuae (37 years old) George Lanuae is the apprentice of Viorel Alexandrescu the Merchant's Guild guild master. Sister - Georgeta Markovic (40 years old) At her husband's estate in Creatoria. Nephew/Niece : Marius Markovic (21 years old) Whereabouts unknown. He went to Japan in search for adventure but no one has heard about him for 6 months. [/hider] Primary Weapon: [White Line] – [Sword] – White Line is a long sword (a katana) made by the best blacksmith in Creatoria specifically for the journey Lilith was about to undertake. The hilt of the sword was made from hardened leather and two small rocks were tied to the hilt. One rock was painted red while the other black. [color=ed1c24][b]Secondary Weapon: Guardian Spirit (Don't know how to write it as a "weapon" so if I did it wrong please "yell" at me)[/b][/color] [color=fff200][b](This was mostly for those who didn't choose "Guardian Spirit" as a secondary weapon. The description for Guardian Spirit can be placed here instead of below. You are free to look at Nioh videos on Youtube to get a visual look at how Guardian Spirits are used in the game. You need to put an actual speed measurement to "how fast" Lilith can run with her passive buff. We're not going to say "she's just fast." I will explain this. When a Guardian Spirit is activated in combat, the weapon your character is wielding becomes imbued with the guardian spirit's element. So her sword will become wrapped in Wind or Air, which applies wind/air damage to her weapon. You can go further to explain that every time she hits an enemy a cyclone rises or her every swing causes great gusts. However you want to describe it. The Guardian Spirit can also be told to attack the enemy. You can explain here how your Guardian Spirit would attack.)[/b][/color] Range: [Porcupine] – [Bow] – A rather simple bow made from light weight wood to be easy to carry. It has the same two rocks as While Line has on it's hilt. Guardian Spirit: [Sarpe] – [Snake] – [Air] – Sarpe is an Black Mamba snake, known for it's speed. His color is a transparent red and he can always be seen (by those that can see Guardian Spirits) around Lilith's neck. Sarpe is not a talkative spirit thought, he can talk when needed. Most of the times, Lilith would hear Sarpe talk only when in combat or something dangerous is approaching. – [Light as Air] – Sarpe imbues Lilith with a speed uncommon in humans, because of this, Lilith is able to execute moves with the sword faster or she is lighter on her feet, allowing her to sprint faster or simply walk faster than a normal person. [hider=WIP] Character Story: What is your character’s story? Like purpose, this is where you explain their purpose. What led them to go on this journey. How did they acquire their weapons, skills, and guardian spirit? What do they hope to accomplish? [/hider] [/hider] EDIT : Do mythological creatures exist in this world ? Like...idk...Kitsune ? [color=fff200][b](Mythical creatures, magic, etc. Only exist on Mahoushima where the Amrita deposits exist.)[/b][/color] [/quote] I made my comments in yellow.