[@Rockette] Well, for starters, that is the purplest prose I have ever read in a character sheet. Which isn't bad, just a bit confusing to get through... to wit, though, the biggest issue I can see is that you have made a fair few SPAG errors, as you've acknowledged, namely using "bourne" instead of "born" multiple times in reference to children being born.

That said, I just need to clarify: Nyx and Nox were born Shadowhunters, were they not? Because the way you've written their sheets almost makes it sound like they were inducted from a mundane family. Either way, I might suggest making that point a bit clearer; and if they are born Shadowhunters- and I forgot to bring this up earlier, for which I apologise- it bears mentioning that traditionally, [url=http://shadowhunters.wikia.com/wiki/Shadowhunters#Known_Nephilim_families]most Shadowhunter surnames are compounds of two words that reflect an aspect of the family or original bearer of the name,[/url] e.g. Light-wood, Love-lace, True-blood, and so on. Bukater is fine as a surname, especially if it is compound, but it's just worth noting that a compound surname is more likely for Shadowhunter families.