[@Rune_Alchemist] Yep. I can see her flaunting everything in front of the priests just to piss them off, and Ciervia glaring at the priests, daring them to do anything.

"Unless she feeds him first"
*remembers Yvette is a good cook*
WELP

[@Cherry Sabers] Several things. Could you fix the layout first? It's sort of difficult to read. And I'd really appreciate if you can elaborate on their descriptions especially since you didn't provide an image. Also, I just can't see feral wyverns attacking any of Erihollow's settlements because the people of Erihollow have close relations with Wyvern dragons, unless you can provide me with a good reason why it would attack now aside from Wyverns are really violent and chaotic.

[@Hippo AF] His military connection is okay, but we're starting with the Listeners having just discovered their abilities. I'm allowing up to a few months before the start of the rp, not eight years. Since his entry to the military faction of Sagewick came from his status as Listener, I'm afraid you're going to have to think of another way he could have gotten the Queen's attention. So yeah, aside from that, the only issue I see is a few typos here and there (mostly with Shdowpine which is actually pronounced "shi-tow-pin")