[@Letter Bee] After the changes made, I approve the CS. Your powers will be physically taxing to use, but thats formality. This isn't a combat RP in any way so that is fine. I'll be watching how you use them in the future to determine whether its at a proper level of power given your characters rather young age. 

[@ZekariVoblis] I can't see any flaws. Wait for Rune and Liferusher to approve further.