[quote=@Holy Soldier]
[@Ryteb Pymeroce]I'm going to tell you right now rather than tell you to go back and make the corrections you missed that I'm more than likely not going to accept this character because his backstory is just too unbelievable. It's so unbelievable that you even write "luck" but then you don't make "luck" a passive ability. You even have him survive off corpses at a young age without taking into consideration any diseases or plagues. It's just too unbelievable even though this is a fictional game, it just fits that one thing I said not to do. The back story is even exasperating to read.
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I guess I'll have to go back to square one, and redo the character completely. Sorry about the backstory, it's always been the part of the cs I struggle with most.