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I didn't see any details that stuck out at me as problematic. I wasn't sure about the accent becoming less noticeable -- that was perhaps my only concern, but if all you're saying is that her English becomes clearer to understand then there's no issue. I wasn't particularly planning for Leonard's Brooklyn accent to go away or anything like that.

Cheers, at any rate, since I've had that Anna post in mind pretty much since I conceived the character (even before I upgraded her from NPC to player characters -- [i]very[/i] little of her plot needed to change), and it's good to know the interaction was enjoyable.

I'm actually wondering how everyone's taking to the whole revelation about Simon, because it's technically upped the stakes of the plot a bit when you think about it. Only Itzal knows, but that'll change soon. Gillard got revealed too.