[quote=@The ghost in black] [hider= Extreme WIP] [center]CS: weapon Name: Maya Bernandes Age: 16 Gender: Female Species: Monster animal (Fox~) Appearance: ~Statistics: Weight- 136 lb Height- 6'1" body type- Slim Hair color- White/pink Eye color- Red [hider= Normal form Picture~] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/3d/8b/ee/3d8bee4d74a82439f56de5fda96bfab3.jpg[/img] [/hider] [hider= Weapon form~] Her Weapon form is a deceptively simple looking sword when her blade is hidden in its sheath of average size for a katana. The sheath itself has a small silver fox tail on it that will portray her emotions along with the silver and black fox engraving that acts as her eyes in emoting. When the blade is drawn the sword doubles in width and then starts to resonate with the Meister. The blade is a bright silver with a tinge of pink which flashes in the bright light. [img]http://imageresize.org/Output/6508bb0b-85c8-491d-91bd-b0c4e9bb2f70.jpg[/img] [/hider] Abilities: Soul Perception- Maya is highly perceptive to soul wavelengths due to her Animal inclination (though she is not able to see them unless she is literally right infront of them), it is almost like she hears them rather than sees them though that should be impossible.... Right~? Partial Transformation- When Maya partially transforms any ends of joints (Ex.Elbows, Knees, Spine, and the joints in her tail) will turn to blades allowing her to utilize it to fight. Soul Projection and Flexibility- Maya is able to use her soul wavelength as a high energy shock wave that not only is devastating at close range but also long range as well.this being said her soul is very strong yet flexible as even if she is not able to resonate with another her rejection is not nearly as harsh as other weapons and meitster's who's wavelengths don't match. Magic: Fox Fire- Maya's personal created magic, she summons a silver and pink flame that coats her entire body before collecting around her ears, eyes, hands, feet, and tail which increases her five senses as well as her soul perception range......It also increases her strength and if she uses it in her weapon for it will light her on fire. Techniques: Fox Fire: Massacre- Launches a volley of indescrimanant fox fire that burns and attacks any of those that would be dubbed an enemy Soul wave: Pulse- In both Maya's weapon and humanoid form she is able to generate a small shockwave from her soul by pumping her soul wavelength into the air and sending it off into a direction. Equipment: List everything your character carries with them, including protective wear, how they carry things, etc. (Anything you carry on you other than your weapon) Personality: Tell us about their personality traits, nobody is perfect. Charming? Loner? Earnest? Pathological liar? Flaws, good traits, we want to know. (What are they like) History: Tell us how your character came to be in the present. What events in their lives shaped them to be the person they are today? Dead parents, were they poor and go hungry? Were they born into a lap of luxury? (Flavor to develop your character) Supporting Characters: Does your character have friends, siblings, parents? Keep a list of them here, please do ensure to add your character’s partner name and character sheet here. If you are partnering up with another player please note the name of the character and the writer. Sample Post: We want to see your level of writing, give us a taste of what you’ll be bringing to the table. Minimum of 3 paragraphs please. [/center] [/hider] [/quote] An ability suggestion/thought about Fox Fire. Instead of having just one function (as a one star weapon might) your character is probably experienced enough to have developed multiple different functions and capabilities, both independently and as a weapon. The ability to use the fire to move stuff without burning it perhaps, or make it so that only Maya and her Meister can see the light from her flames (both attributes that can be taken from a foxes tricky nature). Other possibilities include different types of flame manipulation to Ice magic. Yes, Ice magic. A adept of fire magic can pull the heat out of something (to extinguish the flame for example) and a master can bring it to the point of freezing stuff. Try to be a bit more creative when developing your abilities as they determine when you have available to make techniques. And don't forget to mention stuff like actual physical combat abilities. It isn't just your magical/soul based abilities that matter. Also, you could probably change your "Flexible" soul into being a utility weapon. Instead of only being able to pair up with one or two Meisters your character would have the pick of the lot, although her personality may or may not get in the way here as that section is not yet done. You would of course still have a primary Meister with which you could truly resonate with. Depending on your choices you could have a very wide range Two star Weapon, or a very limited One star weapon. It all depends on what you build into your foundation.