[@Greenie] It's always good to get gasps.

[@TheShadow] You have a decent base, but I feel you really need to go into a lot more detail in the sheet. What does it mean for them to make the Reach great again? Why did Arron fall out with his father? When did he leave? What did he do besides chat up wenches? How long before he came home? As for Thaddeus, his backstory makes little sense. I have a hard time imagining a ten year old could do that, or that he wouldn't have been immediately shipped off to the Night's Watch. And apparently his insanity is so uneven that he could function as a battle commander for a noble family? I need a lot more for all the characters when it comes to history, personality, motivation, and relationships with each other. 

[@Abefroeman] Well you can certainly bring him up as a villainous NPC or even an antagonist PC if you want. But if he's a PC keep in mind that it won't exactly be easy to basically take on the whole south by himself. 

[@bloonewb] If you want, I can allow you to edit William into being in the thick of things.