[quote=@Zardoric]
[@Kouki][@DearTrickster] May I ask you to review my submission and point to anything that may make it better? Other than needing a weapon, although I had an interesting thought on that...
[/quote]

Please do work on a back up plan partner, however we are not reviewing character sheets until we hit the two week mark. Saturday March 25. 

There are other interested players who might be able to help you out.