[@PrivateVentures]

I knew something was off with that sentence! It's a minor edit, so I fixed it to be something more fitting! xD

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Oh, and if anyone is interested in reading/critiquing ([i]please help me[/i]) my first drafts, it's all here: [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/160550-pens-and-swords/ooc#post-4204602]Pens and Swords[/url]
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ohhh, and what's that?