[@Ammokkx]I know you're a talented roleplayer so I'll let the application be shorter but I'd expand their bio to input more info on her childhood, and or any events that may, or may not be important for her. I understand wanting to let out details in the story but it's good to have a solid base for a character.

In the combat section I'd put down more actual combat weaknesses, and strengths. For example on my sheet he is highly specialized in singular combat situations. This leads to him have issues with spatial awareness. He also has no long range combat skills to speak of even if his mech wasn't designed solely for the purpose of close combat. All you have right now is that she's a great planner, and poor at actual in combat competence as she believes her plans to be so good that they're fool proof. 

Is she poor at short range? Is she great at long range? Should it go into neutral jack of all trades category?

Since you want me to set the detail on the grenades I'd say that maybe 4? That sounds reasonable weapon wise.