[@Invader Len] Okay, so I pretty much revamped my character. New height and weight, totally new bio and personality, and I changed the wording on the dislike. I wrote out the bio and personality in first person, it just helped me get out how I wanted to say what his life is like. I promise if I get accepted I will be RPing in 3rd person like any civilized person does.

Also just a side note, had all 3 GM's really never heard the expression "you think your shit doesn't stink?" I thought it was common, it just means someone who thinks they're all that. Like they're so much better than everyone else you would assume they think they're shit smells like flowers and not...shit. Anyways, that's changed to "people who think they're better than everyone" so it's all good.