I think the fact that Cyclone, who wrote the damn thing with me, did not notice that he disagreed with it until now is ridiculous and should count towards leaving it as it is. Had it been my own post, posted on its own, and not in a CyKhollab, I would understand. But the fact that it's in a collab and could have been objected to in the writing process makes me less willing to retro-edit.

Moreover, the fact that no one objected to it, and it is a post now 2 months old, makes me even less willing to edit anything.

Lastly, I don't want to make editing the IC into something that is seen as acceptable - especially not older posts. 

For all these reasons, I vote to leave the IC as it is and work on making sure that Galbar's population is growing and not shrinking.