[@Oliver] Just for posting in the char tab first; I'll kill your parents.

No biggie, you just need to get your character accepted.... but here comes the first obstacle.

Overly critical J, go!

[indent]1). This just might be me being anal retentive but "being easily distracted," and "has an eye for detail," generally don't go hand in hand.

2). You should redefine the limits a bit. Because they seem a bit too general to even be limits. 

[indent]2.1). "He can't manipulate birds into doing things birds aren't normally able to do, i.e breathing fire or speaking English." is just so obvious that it doesn't need to be noted.

2.2) "And while birds understand him, he doesn't understand birds. That said, he doesn't really need to. It's bird manipulation, not bird negotiation." ... I really don't get what this means.

2.3). Limits that would make more sense (but albeit generic) would be "He can't manipulate birds outside ten meters," or "can only manipulate a set amount of birds."[/indent]

3). In accordance to the McAllister Effect, he should have some kind of weakness. Idk what other than "this power hurts my braaaain!" but that would be a good start. 

4). I don't want to be that guy, but try to fix some of the run on sentences. lol

5). I also want to wait until I get my lovely co-Gm ([@Zombiedude101]) opinion before I make a final decision, so be patient.
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Your character's not rejected, but needs a few touch ups to be better.