[@Utrax] Very good, I like Marcus. I don't see anything wrong with him, but I should probably note that his power would inherently buff his strength while transformed. Otherwise he won't be able to move at all. lol

Accepted.

As for Courtney, I like her power, and the idea of a youtuber. But, I think she could use a little bit more detail in a few areas. Specifically her backstory. It feels... incomplete. You never explained how/when she got her power, or her start as a youtuber. And thus, it just feels a bit tacked on. In addition, the dynamics section is for relationships with other characters. Not really NPCs.


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[@Oliver] His limits and weaknesses look muuuuch better now. I think I'll just go ahead and accept him.