[@Ferrocerium] Looks interesting so far bud, but you might want to re-read the rules section.  

[quote]► 1 . 2 . 1   -    Incomplete or in progress sheets should not be posted in the OOC nor should they be posted in the character tab. Completed sheets ready for review are the only character sheets which should be posted in the OOC. If you need a place to store a work in progress sheet, you can create a PM with yourself or a Character Archive thread.[/quote]

Easy mistake to make, and an easier one to fix. Just edit out the sheet there, and re-post it once you're finished. If you want someone to give you feedback on a WIP, just PM me the details and I'll do my best to help.

Cheers, Sam.