[@Lady Amalthea] Here are the edits I'd like to make; [hider=Bryn Personality Second Paragraph]Due to this shift in attitude and personality, Bryn has no fear. She will do anything and everything that she can to survive. She has had many close calls due to this trait in her nature both before and after the outbreak but it has kept her alive this long so it is clearly a good thing, right? Beyond these facets of herself, Bryn is an incredibly private person which leads to her being secretive wherever possible. She’s not entirely untrusting but she finds it difficult to believe anyone that still has a pulse[i], with the exception of her select few favourite breathers[/i]. She [i]generally[/i] prefers the company of the dead for the most part because at least she knows where their nature is leading them.[/hider] [hider=Froggy's Changes]Want to fix the broken link under his name. I think my use of the word disloyal was perhaps incorrect - would like to change this to inconstant instead. This is a better descriptive term for what I imagine Froggy to be like in a heat of the moment situation when his life is on the line. Where he'd prefer to change sides in order to save himself. Some minor changes to his personality section as detailed below; " However, despite this apparently kind and up front personality that Victor has, he is [i]the most likely to change teams if it means he will save his own skin[/i] thanks to the apocalyptic world in which he finds himself. He can feel which way the wind is blowing and will be the first to switch sides if the option presents itself. He considers it to be his duty to live in order to continue to help people that are not “lost causes”. In his mind that is his sole purpose and nothing that anyone does can stop him from his new life’s work. "[/hider] [hider=Dick's Changes]Would like to change scrupulous to diligent - was more meaning he takes care on things he cares and takes pride in - realised that scrupulous was also the wrong choice of word! Want to change his likes and dislikes too - do you need me to list these out? Just want to flesh him out some more than he currently is since he was a quick creation to even up genders when the RP started. <3[/hider]