[quote=@Inertia]
[@Irisity] Tell me if there's something wrong!

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[center][h1][color=#87CEEB]Shaun Defron[/color][/h1]
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[color=#87CEEB]|Name|[/color]
[indent]Full name/Nicknames[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Age|[/color]
[indent]15+, but I'm willing to consider children if you have a good enough reason[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Gender|[/color] 
[indent]M[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Sexuality|[/color]
[indent]Demisexual[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Piercings, Tattoos, Scars|[/color]
[indent]A piercing on his left ear[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Personality|[/color]
[indent]Shaun suffers from 'resting bitch face', and coupled with his shy and awkward disposition he was mostly left alone, seeming unapproachable. He was surprisingly sharp, and intuitive, easily masking his emotions due to prior experiences. After his 'death', he was made more suspicious and untrusting, using his own bias to judge people, not easily changing his mind once it was made up. He also has a slight case of shell shock due to his incident.

After his death he has an extreme discomfort to wearing anything tight around his neck (like ties or bows), leaving them loose and hanging, never tight.[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Why your character was in Renata|[/color]
[indent]Shaun was out travelling but somehow ended up lost, with his car running out of gas in an unknown area (Renata).[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|The Circumstances of the Death|[/color]
[indent]He got out of his car and began exploring around, looking for a gas station or any nearby houses to ask for some assistance/help. Due to uncharted land, and his lack of knowledge he somehow ended up finding a shadowy figure burying a large bag. Shaun was shocked and stumbled out on a fallen branch and made noise, alerting the figure. After a long scuffle he would rather not recall he was asphyxiated with a plastic bag. All he said was at that moment was that he was extremely desperate for one last gasp of breath.[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Power|[/color]
[indent]Shaun becomes embodied by ancient winds, although seeming more viscous and malignant with it producing a distinct whistling/howling, almost deafening as if it was shrieking. It's almost as if the wind were alive. Sometimes the wind becomes difficult to control and placate, so he has to forcefully stop his powers. His powers are like an untamed beast, so much so that his own winds cut him at times.[/indent]

[color=#87CEEB]|Biography|[/color] 
[indent]Shaun was an only son in the Defron family- his parents usually keeping him an arms length away and drowned themselves in their work. Through this he learned how to be self-sufficient and did all the house work, chores, food, etc by himself. Even in his own studies he had no help at home, only being done by himself- his parents making him unintentionally responsible in that regard.

After graduating he had decided to take a short vacation for himself, with his money that he had saved and some his distant parents granted him. Someone ending with him getting lost in Renata.[/indent]
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[hider=Zephyr]
[center][color=#89CFF0][h1]Zephyr, Goddess of the West Winds[/h1][/color]
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[color=#89CFF0]|Name|[/color]
[indent]Zephyrus, Zephyr, Anemoi, Favonius[/indent]

[color=#89CFF0]|Age|[/color]
[indent]Zephyr stopped counting after centuries[/indent]

[color=#89CFF0]|Gender|[/color]
[indent]F[/indent]

[color=#89CFF0]|Domain|[/color]
[indent]Zephyr's reach extends to the winds, going as far back to ancient winds. Her control of the winds is excellent, almost seeming as if the rough, malevolent winds were her plaything.[/indent]

[color=#89CFF0]|Personality|[/color]
[indent]Zephyr was mostly benevolent throughout her 'earlier' years, granting safe passage and luck during harsher times of early humanity. Although now she had grown uncaring (mainly due to the curse of immortality making her indifferent), with her expression not shifting in the slightest even when informed of the new 'demigods'. She cared little for them, though still having that slight tinge curiosity, as did the other gods, infact being slightly amused by the antics of Death. Her immortality even made her enjoy the mantra of 'Who wants to live forever'? Even if she does fulfill her duties, she wouldn't mind being overthrown.[/indent]

[color=#89CFF0]|Other|[/color]
[indent]Zephyr has affiliations with other 'wind' gods.[/indent]
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Looks good! Just remember to put his age and full name, then you can transfer Shaun into characters and I'll put Zephyr in the gods tab