[@Ozerath] "they lack heavier ships such as >>>battleships and dreadnoughts<<<, and instead have absolutely >>>colossal capital ships<<< that completely eclipse the competition." That somehow doesn't sound right...

Ashtar Commando seem pretty OP if they are the main bulk of infantry. I don't mind it as long as the description of dying race applies to how many troops you have (given that most of your dudes never gives up its sentient nature, so new Ashtar minds being bron seem like a rare event to me.). Also, how heavy exactly is the "heavy" armour on it?

"and is also backed up by an energy field that helps it maintain cohesion" NOPE (unless its something else. Energy field is a vague description lol)

"A polaron field holds a burst of energy in suspension until the field dissipates, at which point the energy explodes outwards, destroying projectiles and attenuating energy weapons" also NOPE (I need more than fancy words to approve something like this on every ship)

Pretty solid, and I especially like the concept of Unity. This means that killing a soldier is ultimately nothing, and the fact that your fighters are remote controlled makes my creativity have a boner. Now I do have a rule of thumb with creative technologies that would be too OP mass produced: as long as it stays on your biggest, meanest ship(s) it's fine.

[@Legion02] "lack 2 of the 4 fingers humans have" um, what :lol

I tried really hard to find something that I can argue with, try to mess with you, and be a generall ass, but teh only thing I found was the typo above. Actually, I am just kidding, and I've enjoyed the read. Now I feel like we have so many mages, psionics and all that in the galaxy that I wonder how big the human armada and army must be to conquer all of this. I amf eeling more empowered than when we started XD

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Both of you should move the NS into the CS section. Ozerath we should solve the misunderstandings in the energy tech (I am sure you have a good explanation). Legion, do you have any ships? Seems to be a big part of this RP. (I'd know, I made it after all)

As a reminder to everyone here, diplomatics is important here, even if we've been getting a lot of military tech. It is absolutely pausable to negotiate with the Empire for thing. Like less taxes or smaller production quotas. But you do need a bargaining chip to begin with, so keep in mind that war has 2 sides.