[@The Wyrm] This is all good but there are a few edit's needed:

[quote]Rhaetia dresses in leather and cloth armour, the better to assist in her use of Magic[/quote]

Clothing has no effect on magic. In Formaroth Mages will be wearing Armour just like the rest of the professional soldiers. They may even be wearing more as mages are valued on the battle and people will want to keep them alive.

[quote]Rhaetia commands nearly 8,000 soldiers[/quote] 

I am afraid you will need to lower this by quite a bit as 8,000 is a bit too much for a mercenary company. Claus's steel fist company numbers at 2,500 and that is supposed to be the biggest mercenary company in Formaroth (given most mercenary companies don't even reach a thousand). 3,000 is the max I would say.


Other than that I am enjoying Rhaetia a lot and am looking forward to the completed character sheet. I look forward to her and claus potentially meeting, should be fun.



[quote] Rhaetia severed his manhood and stuffed them into his mouth before stabbing him through the eye.[/quote]

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