[@FrozenEcstasy] I more or less like where you're going with this, but overall the character feels [i]unfocused[/i]. There's just a lot going on thematically. He's a war robot, but also a medical robot, from a planet that is a high tech center, but also a dead world, but also undergoing a vicious civil war. He's a rogue android, but also insatiably curious, but also violent by nature. Kind of understand what I'm getting at? He would benefit from having his concept refined, in my opinion.

[@Irisity] Looks good to me. I would just ask that you maybe go back over your posts in the future, as I found some of your phrasing a bit awkward and verbose at times. No biggy, it could just flow better. Regardless, you're accepted.

A small note I forgot to mention in the setting primer that Sakaal reminded me of: such races as elves, humans, dwarves and so on may exist on many distant worlds in forms that can be identical outside of culture, or moderately divergent. This is believed to be the effect of colonialism in the distant and lost past, seeding many worlds with a small collection of familiar races. Highly divergent races (e.g. a race of mushroom people being called "elves") are attributed to miscommunications between natives and extraterrestrials or colonists.