I'm not critiquing YOU Rai , I'm merely curious. When you describe ghostly ruins as "queerly vast", what did you mean by that?  I know queerly is a synonym of oddly.  So the ruins are just oddly large and deep?  Ever just look at a perfectly good word and that word just looks, well, queer (weird) at that point in time?  That's what happening in my brain right now. O,o

Anywho, my RP plate is plenty full at the moment, but I'm thoroughly enjoying reading this. ^,-