I'm going to need to completely rewrite or scrap entirely a few sections of my CS. (The structure is very poor, and while much of the grammar is correct, I use a lot of indirect object structure which sounds very bad. I will need to tweak some other parts entirely because they come off as very "special snowflakey" and that is a pretty awful basis for a character. It might just be better to scrap the entire thing. ) I expect it'll be a few days before I can make an IC post. Definitely before the weekend.